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Next Tuesday

=== As written by Theo ===1)2)

Next Tuesday, all my troubles seemed too far away

Now it looks like I'm in last Thursday

Oh, I believe in next Tuesday.

Suddenly,

I am twice the man I used to be,

There's an extra leg stuck on my knee,

Oh, next tuesday left suddenly.

Why I had to go

I don't know he wouldn't say.

I wore something wrong,

Now I'm gone from next Tuesday.3)4)

Next Tuesday, war was such an easy game to play.

Now I need new guns to fight again.

Oh, I believe in Next Tuesday.

Why I had to go,

I don't know he wouldn't say.

I wore something wrong,

Now I'm gone from next Tuesday...

Next Tuesday, this was such an easy game to play.

Now I guess I'm just a noob again.

Oh, I believe in next Tuesday.

Mm mm mm mm mm mm mm.5)6)7)

1) A.K.A. Chris, Teia, Theodore, Seraphimus, Mike, Mikey, Michael, Wolf, TheDestroyer1, Stick, Jimbob, Hey You!, SGT. Douchebag and occasionally Stupid
2) Critique would be greatly appreciated ^^
3) This line and the last are hard to put into proper sequence and you have to stretch/shrink syllables off of idea. Is there a way to make it all line up? Same for below.
4) im open for suggestions, i really struggled with coming up with something for this line
5) my attempt to rewrite the Beatles "Yesterday" in honour of my return to the island. so, what do ya think?
6) and while im at it, is it as strange as i think it is for a 19 year old to like the Beatles? cuz i do.
7) Did some cleanup, changed some stuff, I think it works better now. I was recently reminded of this song and felt reinspired. Thank you very much to PeasOfCrab (Who, is also adding this parentheses, just fixed up some capitalization) for asking about it And If anyone would like to try and further improve upon this Feel free to go ahead
 
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